The Other Side of the Moon
We are far from home.
This day my lady, like our sister the Moon, fixed a bland and pleasant countenance then, in sable and silks, rubies and pearls, she wed her prince. Have we not studied the world within and the world without, these happy years – the poets and the star-gazers, the workings of fish and fowl and beast? My lady will know how to please her lord; he in turn will swell her belly.
And so for now I keep the long hours betwixt midnight and the dawn alone, soothing my jealous heart with reminders of her sweet promises.
M J Lewis ©2015
I’ve been reading about the common practice, across time and many cultures, of two sleeps. The idea is full of appealing possibilities, personally and fictionally. A long night punctuated by a period of wakeful solitude or sociability, study or prayer, love or mischief (or both). As someone who sleeps at the edge of the city, with a streetlight outside my window, I long for those dark reaches of the night – a velvet darkness or a star-studded sky. Either would do. That chap Edison has a lot to answer for!
On another note, I have no idea how anyone writes Friday Fiction on a Wednesday without dreaming it first. Impossible! A speedy recovery to Rochelle and thanks to Madison Woods for the photo. So far there some shiveringly good stories.
The language here is captivating.
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You certainly nailed the tone of this piece. Well done.
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Great title and the piece took me to an bygone era. Well done.
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A lovely voice here. I can only imagine what the lady hath promised…
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Lyrical prose. I really like it.
Tracey
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The promises of love, the loneliness of failed promises. Ditto on the lovely lyrical voice.
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Beautiful
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Beautiful read. It flowed so nicely. I was captivated.
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Excellent piece.
Seems like the lady has more faces than the moon.
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Lucky lady, lucky lord. Lilting, lyrical and lovely. (Sorry about the alliteration)
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Very beautiful language. It reads like a past era, or a fantasy parallel earth.
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Beautiful, so few words and yet holding a whole world. v
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