The Spinet and the Music Stool
They were the words every lover dreads: I’ll always cherish our time together.
The spinet wanted to bellow out his misery, but his strings just gently vibrated with sadness. She was much younger; he’d always known their time together would be short, a song rather than a symphony.
But the new walnut pianoforte, with his rolling bass and piercing climax of high notes, his seductive dynamic range – it was too much.
Take care my love, whispered the spinet in moderated tones. May your heart be filled with happy tunes.
And his own heart broke within him with a jarring twang.
M J Lewis ©2016
Coming along very late to the party this week due to internet problems. I appear to be still in a Hans Christian Andersen mood – not sure why.
Thanks to Rochelle, our busy host at Friday Fiction, and to Jan W. Fields for the photo this week. For more musically inspired 100-word fiction click here.
I enjoyed this, seems like I should keep writing on my old computer: I don’t want it to twang to soon. Michael
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Ah the old computer – question is do you love it and does it love you? Thanks for the visit.
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Oh, she’s fickle – seduced by a showy loudmouth. Poor Spinet. Well told. I love the feel and tone of this – the Hans Christian Andersen mood is working for you.
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A showy loudmouth with a polished walnut exterior to boot! My mother once sentimentally dragged us out to visit a poor unloved spinet abandoned in a farmer’s barn – she played it briefly, but wasn’t actually sentimental enough to buy it. Thanks for your lovely comments.
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This is lovely and sad but the choice of words and way you tell it make it subtly humorous, too. We can only hope for the little spinet that another young girl comes along soon and fixes that poor broken heart.
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Alas I think the spinet has had his day, but he could be comforted by the fact even the piano will probably one day be redundant too.
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So sad to be thrown on the scrap heap for a younger more powerful model with his seductive dynamic range and whatnot. Nice analogy with life and love!
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That’s progress for you!
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I love the whimsy and the sweetness of this story! Reminds me strangely of “The Happy Prince.”
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It must be that broken heart! I definitely think you’re right about that influence.
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